The Top of the Mark ~ Snow Melts in Spring
My favorite part of that scene is when Mattie appears at the party at the Top of the Mark. Gil asked her to attend, but they'd gotten into a fight about it--you know, silly stuff. Then her best friend, Clara, convinces her to fly out there, knowing how much it will mean to Gil to share this moment with Mattie. She even borrows a fancy black dress from Clara.
She surprises him at the party, they have a romantic moment on the trolley car, and the next day Gil shows her the estate he intends to buy in Sonoma County. Can we say "rich?" Things don't go quite the way Gil hopes in this scene, but I love it just the same.
My research for San Francisco was a lot of fun, and with the Internet, it was easy to find information I needed for these scenes. The retirement party was held at the Top of the Mark, so I researched the Mark Hopkins Hotel, asked questions about the restaurant, and also learned about the nearby trolley cars. Researching homes for sale near Healdsburg was also great fun! I actually used one of the floor plans as my guide when Gil and Mattie toured the home.
So, if you've read Snow Melts in Spring, what was your favorite scene from California? Do you have a favorite scene from the book that you'd like to know more about? I'd love to share with you here.
Favorite Scenes - Snow Melts in Spring
As you probably know, I adore the Flint Hills of Kansas, and because this book sets the tone for the entire series, I wanted to give my readers a chance to see and fall in love with the hills themselves.
My first opportunity to do so occurred at the Lighting M Ranch when Mattie visits John McCray to discuss the injuries of his son's horse. While there, he invites her to ride out in the pasture and look at a sick heifer. She rides one of his mares and enjoys the scenery on her return to the ranch. Meanwhile, Gil is flying over the ranch in a private Cessna and lands on the neighbor's airstrip.
In these two scenes I allow readers to see the hills from horseback but also give them an areal view of the rock embedded pastures. If you haven't done so already, you may READ THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS HERE. Next time, I'll share another favorite scene about Gil's real estate search in California.
Snow Melts in Spring as a Movie
I've also been asked who I might cast as my characters for the movie. This is a fun question and one I now use when I'm creating my characters--forming a "Hollywood" image for the hero and heroine. I also gather pictures of my "actor" and pin them to my story board--a bulletin board that I use as my visual aid, full of my characters, their home, horses, pets, children, etc.
Fictional Character Interview with Gil McCray
Speaking of horses, how is Dusty doing? - That old boy is enjoying his last days on our ranch. I like putting him in with the new colts and letting him show them who's boss. He still has a few tricks and isn't afraid to try them.Character Interview with Mattie (Evans) McCray
Researching Snow Melts in Spring
Researching Football and Old Houses
I began with a visit to our local library, where I checked out an armload of books--mostly from the children's section, as they are full of pictures, are easy to read, and are chock-full of valuable information. Fortunately, we were in the midst of football season when I was working on this part of my research, so I also watched a lot of games on television--much to the disdain of my three daughters, but which greatly pleased my hubby.
So, I read, I watched, and I asked my football-loving friends and family hundreds of questions--all so I could write two or three scenes with authenticity! I also bought a football so I could hold it in my hands and pretend to be "Gil." An author has to get into the character's head, after all.
Another fun aspect of research came with discovering the "setting" for the McCray Ranch.
But no matter, the Clover Cliff became the basis for John McCray's Lightning M Ranch. Built in 1860, near Elmdale, KS, this charming home became my characters' home--with just a few changes. The Donahues were very helpful, answering many questions I had about ranch life in the Flint Hills, and allowing us to roam the house and pastures.
At the back of this house is a small stone cabin where the original owner lived while building the main home for his family. This cabin became the basis for Mattie's cabin when her home burns down in Diamond Falls. Small details such as the renovated wood stove that Mattie cooked on, or the table and rocker in her room were actual items in the original cabin.
Next time, I'll offer a one-on-one interview with our lady veterinarian, Mattie Evans. I hope you'll enjoy it!
Behind the Scene Moments ~ Snow Melts in Spring
Let's Begin With Research - The Horse Injury and Dusty's Healing Process
Every novelist must "jump" into their characters' skins, and that often means we must learn things we don't already know. How do we do this? The Internet is an invaluable tool, as is our local library or bookstore. Sometimes, though, our questions can't be answered and we have to go to our "source." Often that means interviewing someone by email, by phone, or in person. For an introvert writer who spends the majority of her time in front of a computer, this can be terrifying.
This was not an easy process. We looked at past case scenarios, most of them resulting in putting the animals down. But there were a few instances where the horses lived, so we worked to build on those premises. Once I finished writing the horse scenes, I asked one of the veterinarians to read over the material to check for accuracy, wanting to cover all the bases. I even shadowed one small animal vet for a day in order to get a feel for what a "day in the life" might look like for my character who was also a vet.
Country Magazine
I'm not sure if you can find this magazine on store racks, but you can order it from their website. Plus, my publisher Zondervan, is helping out with an amazing book drawing on the Country Magazine site. Enter your chance to win either Snow Melts in Spring or Seeds of Summer between now and May 31 by following the magazine directions. Twenty chances to win!Other News: Author Event - Please join us.
Multi-author book signing at the Town Crier Bookstore in Emporia, KS - Saturday, April 3, from 11:00 - 1:00. If you're in the area, I'd love to visit with you.
My Visit to Phoenix
Until then, here are a few snapshots from last week as well as two new blog sitings for Snow Melts in Spring.
- A church library review by Brenda Anderson at Spire Reviews
- Interview at Blog Talk Radio - Sisters on Assignment
Snow Melts in Spring Blog Sitings
- Author interview at My Book Addictions and More
- Book review at Raindrops & Rainbows
- Book review by Bethany at Are You Really Reading Another Book?
Reviews & Book Signing in Topeka
Here are two new reviews of Snow Melts in Spring. Be sure to stop by and leave a comment for the blogger.
Review by Sharon at Horse Book Reviews
Review & Author Interview at Aus Jenny
Review by Merrie Hanson at On My Favorite's List
Review by Carmon at A Sequence of Continuous Delights
Newsletter Gift Drawing
Tallgrass Prairie in America the Beautiful Quarters Program
The Tallgrass Prairie National Preserve is located in my favorite part of the Flint Hills near Strong City, KS--the heart of the Flint Hills. To learn more about the preserve, please visit their web site.
Here are two more places on the web you might be interested in visiting:
- Ten Writing Tips at Seriously Write (A Blog for Christian Writers)
- Snow Melts in Spring receives 4 1/2 star review by Laura at A Romance Review
- Review by Lori at Some of my Favorite Books
On Julia Child and another book giveaway
Happy Labor Day, everyone. Last night our family went to the theatre to see Julie & Julia. We had been waiting for the movie to make it to our area, and it finally did! Much to our pleasure. My daughters and I love to cook, so watching this film was a special delight for us, and made us want to do more with our cooking. I searched Amazon.com as soon as I returned home to see how much Julia Child's cookbook was and was amazed to find it in my price range--of course, the original cookbooks, published in the 1960's sold for over $100, but I don't need an antique. LOL Author Visits, Facebook & More
For those of you on Facebook, I recently formed a Readers Group where we can chat about my books & characters. Right now, I'm offering readers a chance to win a free $15 Barnes & Noble gift card. Visit here for details. (Scroll down to the appropriate discussion board.)
Here is a book review for Snow Melts in Spring by Crystal Miller - Chat "n" Chew Cafe
Radio Interview and more
- Radio interview with Tom at 91.1 FM KCFN (out of Wichita) Airs live at 4:05 PM Central
Here are a few more places on the web offering interviews and/or reviews for Snow Melts in Spring. Please check them out when you have a moment.
- Fun "childhood" author interview with Crystal Lane Miller at When I Was Just a Kid. - (Crystal is giving away a copy of Snow Melts in Spring)
- Book review by Mary Bell Foster at A Writer's Spiritual Journey
- Book review by Martha Artyomenko at Our Family's Adventures
And for those writers out there, I've posted on the Christian Authors Network blog on My Marketing Journey - The Little Engine that Could. I'll continue my posts there on the last Thursday of each month. This is a great blog to follow if you want to learn about the publishing business, especially marketing & promoting your books.
Snow Melts in Spring Blog Sightings
- Endearing post from Beth Goddard on her blog The Write Message
- Fun book review by Renee at Steeler Girl's Blog (BTW, I'm glad you won my book, Renee, and took the chance to read it--and enjoy it!)
- Book review by Jane Squires at The Celebrity Cafe
- Book review by Jean Teller at The Open Book, Grit Magazine Blog
If you've spotted Snow Melts in Spring at a bookstore recently, I'd love to know where you saw it, and whether the cover or spine was displayed. This past week, I received another shipment of author books and learned that Snow Melts had gone into its third printing. Woo-hoo! Plus, the books now have author endorsements in them. So cool!
Thanks for visiting and have a great week!
Snow Melts in Spring Blog Sightings
- Fun Interview by Mimi Baker at Woven by Words
- Review by Donna Moore at Write by Faith
- Quick interview with Tracy Ruckman for the National Christian Writing Examiner
Snow Melts in Spring Blog Sightings
- Lovely book review by Mary Lenaburg - Passonate Perseverance
- Fun interview with Tabitha Bird on her Books, Bubs and Writing Blabber
- Nice review by Martha Rogers - Martha Writes - Post a comment on Martha's post to enter a chance to win Snow Melts in Spring.
And for any writers out there, here is a great marketing tool - Christian Authors Network
TV Interview and More
Like this morning, I'd prepared for the interview--worked up my answers, ironed my clothes, was having a great hair day--everything was good, despite that I had to get up at 4:00 A.M. So after an hour drive to the station, I'm eventually escorted into the newsroom, asked to sit down, and they clip a microphone onto my lapel without any kind of direction or instruction. Tawnya Bach, the Morning Show Host, was a peach and gave a quick run-through of the format--and then 3-2-1, we're on and she's asking me a question...but wait . . . I'd planned to open with what Ms. Bach said. So, now what???
I froze! Literally, in mid-sentence. LOL
Then I looked toward the camera--but whoa, there's two or three of them--so which one do I look at? And then the camera guy holds up his fingers and starts counting down. What? Do I even have time to finish what I'm saying??? All of this is going through my mind.
Needless to say, the interview didn't go as well as I'd hoped, but Ms. Bach saved the day with her prompts--oh how I wish I could have been as cool and collected as she! I did manage to sputter a few details about the book and series, and the station graciously added my web site to the show to drive some readers my way, so I guess it wasn't a total loss.
Here are two more sightings for Snow Melts in Spring:
- Review by Deb Bryan at Topeka and Shawnee County Public Library
- Lovely Review by Susan Mires









